The planes are not enough counterweight to the tank, too close to the buildings. I guess they'd be fine if moved a bit in up-right direction.

Also I'm not sure about the titanium white of the building... it sticks out a bit, too 'real' for the tank. Maybe mirroring the white of the building in the light parts of the tank would do the trick... or better, coloring some of the tank parts in titanium white... it would also give a more detailed effect of the tank perhaps? If you got rid of the white the image would have a more warlike look. And wouldbe beter to print (two colours only), especially on a textured paper... mmm, yummy.


The empty space on the left of the tank caterpillar tracks is nice. The tank sort of flows into the space because of the perspective. Really nice.


Pity the size is so small, I can't poke at the details... They're just messy and blurry.


Nice text arrangement.

I keep getting the feeling that the building looks too neat for a ruin.

who's face in the background?

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nice colors and layout.

minimalistic and sexy.

Thanks a million~!
I love ur avatar
Super cool~!

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thank U~!
WHen are u gonna post new stuff


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no ones


Its just a face i have in my brush set

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Marcus...this is AWESOME!

/me bows

thanks for ur critique


Its tis constructive comments that helps me do better.
I will keep tis in mind.


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haha
no need to bow.
I dun think its all tat great



ITP is ending soon~!
YEAH~!

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